Please do, I am not in the mood to deal with it.
Huh, extra work on my part.
Jeez, ugh....has the problem been resolved?
I go to dinner and all hell breaks loss, did I miss anything?
Like I said, something like that, you can obviously change somethings to make more sense.
Okay, so I read through it, preety decent a few grammer errors, but nothing to bad. The story is in first person from Ace perspective if I am correct. So heres how I would personally phrase it.
I felt an intense rays of light beading on my eyes as they slowly opened them. My vision was stilll blurry, but I could make out that I was resting on something in closed off room. That's when I noticed her, that same girl, laying down at my side, but why.
Or something like that.
No, it doesn't, but I still context to help.
Hm, well that depends on the point of view your going with.
As self appointed head of this stuff, I shall answer.
Basically yes, we techically already have one with certian Cloud being apart of Symphogear Universe 2. So it is approved by that standard.
But now the question is will said character be apart of Universe 2 or will be in different universe.
Good question by the way.